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My favorite part about the trip was when we getting into the clothes it was really funny seeing people in those strange clothes! We all looked so weird.
Have you ever been to Ferrymead?
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Hi Corinne. I loved how you added your favorite part about the trip and yes I have been to ferry mead. I think maybe next time you could make it a little bit longer but overall I think that it was great.
ReplyDeleteThank you La la!
ReplyDeleteit was great to learn about Ferrymead since I was on holiday but the only thing i would change about it is to make it a little bit longer. but no I haev never been to Ferrymead
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback Mimi & Lara 💕😇
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