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Thursday, November 28, 2019
The Ferrymead Trip
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So tumu hub went to the bus and we drove away. After about 20 minutes we had arrived, and there was this strange man guiding us where we were going. It was so weird! we had parent help to come along with us. As soon as we got out of the bus, we had to go in front of the man that was guiding us.
My favorite part about the trip was when we getting into the clothes it was really funny seeing people in those strange clothes! We all looked so weird.
Have you ever been to Ferrymead?
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Hi Corinne. I loved how you added your favorite part about the trip and yes I have been to ferry mead. I think maybe next time you could make it a little bit longer but overall I think that it was great.
ReplyDeleteThank you La la!
ReplyDeleteit was great to learn about Ferrymead since I was on holiday but the only thing i would change about it is to make it a little bit longer. but no I haev never been to Ferrymead
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback Mimi & Lara 💕😇
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