hey everyone! this week for writing we had to write a poem. we could write about anything in any way, shape or form, apart from an acrostic poem. so i chose to do mine on lockdown. i chose a rhyming poem because to me, their easier to write. so here it is:
i hope you enjoyed reading my poem
questions:
is there anything i need to change about my poem?
what would you write about?
Kia ora Corinne,
ReplyDeleteNice job on the poem! I love the rhyming featured in your poem. Next time I would love to see a catchy title featured. Ka pai!
thank you. will do :)
DeleteHi Corinne, I just loved your poem. The rhyming was clever, almost like a rap. Your message was a good reminder, that we need to watch out for each other during this uncertain time. Maybe you could add another verse which focus's on some things, you could do if your feeling a bit low? I like to go for big walks. What are some fun activities that you done during lock down?
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thank you miss Judd. ok i will probably edit it. i went for long walks with mom and Trevor every day :)
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